4815162342 Posted June 5, 2019 Share Posted June 5, 2019 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YM! Posted June 5, 2019 Share Posted June 5, 2019 Now that I finished my Mario outline, I can go right into Sp4rk tonight. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4815162342 Posted June 5, 2019 Share Posted June 5, 2019 @Spaghetti I am not going to say anything about Sp4rk while I read it except probably this one thing Spoiler LMAO Blanks is gonna get so annoyed 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted June 5, 2019 Share Posted June 5, 2019 8 minutes ago, 4815162342 said: @Spaghetti I am not going to say anything about Sp4rk while I read it except probably this one thing Hide contents LMAO Blanks is gonna get so annoyed I'm not sure if you'd get to this part in 20 minutes but I think I know what it is, lmao. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4815162342 Posted June 5, 2019 Share Posted June 5, 2019 Done See you in August @Spaghetti 1 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4815162342 Posted June 5, 2019 Share Posted June 5, 2019 (edited) Ok, one thing I will say @Spaghetti On 10/16/2018 at 9:53 PM, 4815162342 said: Also @Spagheditary I know it isn't going to happen but seriously after that first credits scene I will laugh my ass off in Film #4 if Reveal hidden contents During the big action climax with the Soltarans overwhelming the Resistance we get Super Saiyan Daddy Spark entering the ring like Hide contents BRING ME TAREK! It'd be legit WTF AWESOME BUT WAIT THIS DOESN'T MAKE SENSE AH SCREW IT LET'S DO THIS Spoiler Not quite that, but in the rough neighborhood. Edited June 5, 2019 by 4815162342 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted June 5, 2019 Author Share Posted June 5, 2019 @Spaghetti Time to finish this. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted June 5, 2019 Author Share Posted June 5, 2019 Spoiler 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted June 5, 2019 Share Posted June 5, 2019 Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted June 5, 2019 Author Share Posted June 5, 2019 10 minutes ago, Spaghetti said: Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck One word: Spoiler TEETH 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted June 5, 2019 Share Posted June 5, 2019 I imagine people are going to lose their SHIT at that scene in the theater. Tarek was a huge asshole, an awesomely gnarly death. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted June 5, 2019 Author Share Posted June 5, 2019 I'm done. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted June 5, 2019 Share Posted June 5, 2019 Just now, cookie said: I'm done. *cue There Will Be Blood music Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted June 5, 2019 Author Share Posted June 5, 2019 Just now, Spaghetti said: *cue There Will Be Blood music You want the answers now or do you want to wait until August? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted June 5, 2019 Share Posted June 5, 2019 1 minute ago, cookie said: You want the answers now or do you want to wait until August? Hmmm...I *SHOULD* probably wait until August, but... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted June 5, 2019 Author Share Posted June 5, 2019 2 minutes ago, Spaghetti said: Hmmm...I *SHOULD* probably wait until August, but... I can withhold my review but there is one thing I think you should fix before Part 1 closes. (Minimal spoilers below) Spoiler Some parts are very confusingly written, mainly in the third act. A lot of it has to do with how it cuts between different scenes and characters without there being any transition in the text, or if so is hidden in the paragraphs so that it becomes somewhat easy to miss. I was halfway through a dialogue break before realizing it wasn't the characters I just followed that were actually talking but rather a different set of characters the movie just cut to. It meant I had to go back and do double and triple takes just to make sure where I was. Beyond the Sky, issues I had with it otherwise, felt much smoother in comparison. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted June 5, 2019 Share Posted June 5, 2019 If y'all are okay with it, I can brush up some of the writing in the climax. In doing so, I'll block off reviews for sure until August 5th. In other words, NOTHING will change plot wise. I'm just gonna tweak some things in the climax so its easier to read. Mild spoilers: There are a LOT more moving pieces in the finale compared to any other film I've done to date, so I can easily brush things up a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rorschach Posted June 14, 2019 Share Posted June 14, 2019 The popcorn has been popped @Spaghetti. You know what that means 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted June 14, 2019 Share Posted June 14, 2019 1 minute ago, Rorschach said: The popcorn has been popped @Spaghetti. You know what that means Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rorschach Posted June 14, 2019 Share Posted June 14, 2019 Spoiler I see I'm not the only one who decided to put a trippy dream sequence at the beginning of their epic finale. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
