riczhang Posted July 7, 2012 Share Posted July 7, 2012 (edited) For Storm-to make it easier, put 2 seperate spoiler tags.Okay.EDIT: Does it work now? Edited July 7, 2012 by riczhang Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Impact Posted July 7, 2012 Author Share Posted July 7, 2012 Um no just 2 parts. Dang I don't know what to say....I think you should just shorten the plot.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riczhang Posted July 7, 2012 Share Posted July 7, 2012 Um no just 2 parts. Dang I don't know what to say....I think you should just shorten the plot....It's in 2 parts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Impact Posted July 7, 2012 Author Share Posted July 7, 2012 Yes I know, but its very short now. I'm just saying make the plot shorter. I don't know how the spoiler tags work...or you can use white color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riczhang Posted July 7, 2012 Share Posted July 7, 2012 Yes I know, but its very short now. I'm just saying make the plot shorter. I don't know how the spoiler tags work...or you can use white color.I'm cutting it down, getting rid of the dialogue examples will probably shorten the entire thing by 1000-2000 words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riczhang Posted July 7, 2012 Share Posted July 7, 2012 I've cut 1000+ words from it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Impact Posted July 7, 2012 Author Share Posted July 7, 2012 Okay I locked it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blankments Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 Yeah, I've been thinking about it... and I want everyone to count the Loch Ness movie's budget as $40 million. I did have it ridiculously low, and if it's too late to officially change it, fine, but I wanted to try to make it more realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riczhang Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 Am I missing something about 8AM or what? Because both Alfred, and Blankments tracked 8AM to finish quite high, and I don't see the appeal of it at all, nor did I like it........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Impact Posted July 8, 2012 Author Share Posted July 8, 2012 Will Smith is in it :PThough MIB3 was a fantastic film and wont finish over 200m.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riczhang Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 Will Smith is in it :PThough MIB3 was a fantastic film and wont finish over 200m....*cough*Midnight Part II*cough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Impact Posted July 8, 2012 Author Share Posted July 8, 2012 I called it a cameo in my review-he litterly had nothing written for him. Plus this is his type of film. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riczhang Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 I called it a cameo in my review-he litterly had nothing written for him. Plus this is his type of film.True, but I just felt that the film was really flat in like every way. When I was reading it, I could literally feel the flat acting.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blankments Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 Well, I looked at the source material and then adjusted to today's time along with the star appeal to bring it up to the numbers I gave it. Plus, that's a good day for blockbusters in the past. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Impact Posted July 8, 2012 Author Share Posted July 8, 2012 If your going to do a plot-don't copy it word for word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riczhang Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 If your going to do a plot-don't copy it word for word.??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Impact Posted July 8, 2012 Author Share Posted July 8, 2012 Man and his Hat-coppied word for word from another site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riczhang Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 Man and his Hat-coppied word for word from another site.Ah, that makes sense now. That's a same, it was almost tailor-made for Burton. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Impact Posted July 8, 2012 Author Share Posted July 8, 2012 Well...I guess I'll go 48 on him for coppying off of somewhere 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Community Manager Water Bottle Posted July 8, 2012 Community Manager Share Posted July 8, 2012 Why am I not surprised that people don't like the film I'm proud of this year? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...