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10 minutes ago, cookie said:

Hopefully nobody's started reading my film yet since I kinda want to do a run through of it today just to make sure. Saw a few glaring errors will skimming by 😬

I won’t get to it until maybe 7pm EST so you’ve got time.

 

Just please tell me it’s shorter than the original, right?!

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@cookie you will be happy to know that as part of my editing last night I took out an entire quasi-exposition scene near the end of the film :jeb!:

 

 

And in my initial plot outline there were actually two back-to-back, though one didn't make it into the first draft :sparta:

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2 minutes ago, Spaghetti said:

I won’t get to it until maybe 7pm EST so you’ve got time.

 

Just please tell me it’s shorter than the original, right?!

It is shorter.

 

Some parts may be more hilariously overdescribed than the original, but as a whole it is shorter.

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4 minutes ago, 4815162342 said:

 

Does it beat out One Punch Man for the count champ?

This may change slightly as I try and fix a few things but the document is currently:

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26,662 words

 

The dream was to get under Odyssey 3 length but I never had the time to do proper trimming.

 

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Pillars 2 definitely stands out with the run time, but given that definitely more happens in this one than the first and it's a bit sprawling in set-up, it's an appropriate jump imo.

 

 

Bambi nearly 2.5 hours.... :winomg:

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6 hours ago, Blankments said:

Scooby is 131 min!!

 

6 hours ago, YourMother the Edgelord said:

After taking care of a small edit and fixed a major typo, SG is now at 11,461.

Fixed both charts

 

 

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