Ezen Baklattan Posted April 23, 2018 Share Posted April 23, 2018 11 minutes ago, Xillix said: @Isle of Pasta Very important question. Does Kozar have hair on his head like a human? This will impact your review score. For what it's worth, I admit that I'm not as descriptive in my writing as I should be at times, but I do somewhat like to leave the details of what these worlds and species look like exactly to the imagination of the readers. For what it's worth....not EXACTLY. His fur will spike up around his head, but I wouldn't call it exactly human-like. He's definitely more akin to a straight anthropomorphic wolf (Heaton did quite a bit of mo-cap) than even like a werewolf, but if he does have any "hair" on his head, it'll be more of an extension of his fur. This is a reasonable example, I think: https://rogueliger.deviantart.com/art/Assassin-Wolfie-Anthro-117694932 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 23, 2018 Share Posted April 23, 2018 (edited) @Xillix @4815162342 @Isle of Pasta @YourMother the Edgelord @Ethan Hunt @Rorschach @Hiccup23 Here you go, y'all. A fixed version of Scavenger Wars. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oLHNR2HrnpYy617h33qA0aPEu0VvQLN3OlEvg2p3XLc/edit?usp=sharing Edited April 24, 2018 by cookie 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 23, 2018 Share Posted April 23, 2018 4 minutes ago, cookie said: @Xillix @4815162342 @Isle of Pasta @YourMother the Edgelord @Ethan Hunt @Rorschach Here you go, y'all. A fixed version of Scavenger Wars. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oLHNR2HrnpYy617h33qA0aPEu0VvQLN3OlEvg2p3XLc/edit?usp=sharing I can put this link in your Part 1 post if you're not able to (I forget if you can after it's locked, but being a mod has its perks) 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 23, 2018 Share Posted April 23, 2018 1 minute ago, Isle of Pasta said: I can put this link in your Part 1 post if you're not able to (I forget if you can after it's locked, but being a mod has its perks) You can't edit a post after a thread is locked, so please do that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xillix Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 I just re-read Cataclysmic and realized I left in an error... I say an opening is too BIG for Jennifer Lawrence to fit through. Obviously I meant too SMALL. Just... a heads-up, I guess. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 Mind if I fix a missing link in NFTO? Apparently there’s a video link that didn’t embed (it was in the initial version so I’m not editing it). 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 Gonna start working on Voltron 3 tonight so y'all can have a preview version by the end of the week. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 Oh and @Isle of Pasta there's a thing in Bounty Hamster I'm stealing for Voltron 3. Used in a very different context, just so you know. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethan Hunt Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 16 minutes ago, cookie said: Oh and @Isle of Pasta Reveal hidden contents there's a thing in Bounty Hamster I'm stealing for Voltron 3. Used in a very different context, just so you know. Which character is gonna start swallowing things whole 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 @Rorschach Prepare yourself. Starting it now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rorschach Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 2 minutes ago, Isle of Pasta said: @Rorschach Prepare yourself. Starting it now. In the middle of PoE myself. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 * Starts reading Redeeming Love just to see what all the fuss is about * Okay this opening is on somewhat shaky grounds but I wanna see where it goes from here, they're heading to this plantation and- WHAT. WHAT THE FUCK. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 1 minute ago, cookie said: * Starts reading Redeeming Love just to see what all the fuss is about * Okay this opening is on somewhat shaky grounds but I wanna see where it goes from here, they're heading to this plantation and- WHAT. WHAT THE FUCK. Okay sorry @Rorschach I gotta see this shit for myself. You're gonna have to wait a few moments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 Okay, okay, I think I'm over the initial shock, boy that plantation part hits you like Quote Miriam, who begins to fancy Paul, who is living at the other end of the valley. When Angel sees Miriam talking with Michael, she assumes that they have feelings for one another and jumps to the conclusion that they would make a much better couple than she and Michael. Uhhh okay, I guess we can go with tha- 16-year old Miriam NO NO NO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 Oh god this really is Ye Old Life to Waste. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 (edited) Quote Meanwhile, it is revealed in a flashback that during her time as Duke [the plantation pedophile]'s mistress, Angel got pregnant twice and both times an infuriated Duke had a doctor abort it, EDIT: I SPOKE TOO SOON She also reveals that she once had sex with her own father, who came to her brothel, in a bid for revenge because he left her mother. Edited April 24, 2018 by cookie 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rorschach Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 18 minutes ago, Isle of Pasta said: Okay sorry @Rorschach I gotta see this shit for myself. You're gonna have to wait a few moments. I gotta check this out myself. My curiosity has spiked immensely. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 (edited) Quote When she is finally before them, the voice of God tells her to sing and she starts singing "Rock of Ages" to the awed and confused crowd. Rock of Ages?! In the 1840s?! Did Baz Luhrmann take over this movie?! Cookie's Corner's Review of Redeeming Love And I thought My Life to Waste was bad. And how the fuck is this PG-13?! The MPAA board must have been drunk. F Edited April 24, 2018 by cookie 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rorschach Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 Read it. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rorschach Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 @Isle of Pasta Hey, look on the bright side, maybe The Odyssey will seem like Citizen Kane after reading that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
