YM! Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 (edited) Next year, I think will be better for EE. I feel my writing skills slowly but surely improving. I mean GOW has better reviews than I thought it would. Stitch actually is holding up good. And My Peoples is doing better than my other animated fare. Edited April 25, 2018 by YourMother the Edgelord 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xillix Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 Okay okay okay so....... I leave this up to you guys BUT. I just realized there's a small continuity error in Silent Hill that I missed during rewrites. If it's okay with you all I'd love to be able to do the Google Docs thing cuz it's bugging me... but if not I understand 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 7 minutes ago, Xillix said: Okay okay okay so....... I leave this up to you guys BUT. I just realized there's a small continuity error in Silent Hill that I missed during rewrites. If it's okay with you all I'd love to be able to do the Google Docs thing cuz it's bugging me... but if not I understand Go ahead. Because if we’re being honest today I sneaked in a few changes to the SW Google Docs mainly to fix one scene that made no sense in the posted version and to fix another scene in the third act that lacked explanation. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xillix Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 @Isle of Pasta @Hiccup23 @4815162342 @YourMother the Edgelord @Ethan Hunt @cookie @Rorschach Here's the link to the very slightly changed Silent Hill: Innocence Lost that fixes a continuity error in the third act. Just three sentences changed. Please read this for your reviews kthnx: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dH5r-nfV4yuft7n6ooxyGpiwBhroNJNxfCkjarRJuqs/edit?usp=sharing 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 Finished Reunion's opening sequence. It's... something, alright. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YM! Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 I’m starting to write Connor’s Legacy going to change a bit of the original plot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 Once I get home (5pm EST) im starting the Scavenger Wars. Ready to be a tastemaker. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xillix Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 While I'm not surprised that SoulCalibur is getting trashed (it's kind of bad on purpose) I am surprised the main criticism seems to be that it's boring. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 So I just came home from the theater and... I have a massive urge to change plans for Voltron 3 right now 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xillix Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 13 minutes ago, cookie said: So I just came home from the theater and... Hide contents I have a massive urge to change plans for Voltron 3 right now Cookie stop ripping off MCU movies for Voltron :B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 10 minutes ago, Xillix said: Cookie stop ripping off MCU movies for Voltron :B If I actually ripped it off I'd be probably banned for breaking the spoiler rules Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 For what it’s worth, @cookie, The Scavenger Wars is longer than the novel Animal Farm. So there’s that. 1 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 2 minutes ago, Isle of Pasta said: For what it’s worth, @cookie, The Scavenger Wars is longer than the novel Animal Farm. So there’s that. So I'm a more prolific writer than George Orwell is what you're saying Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 Laptop open. Coffee brewing. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 4 minutes ago, Isle of Pasta said: Laptop open. Coffee brewing. I think the pre-opening credits prologue is in itself about 3,500 words. Should go back and check. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 I think a certain Sci-Fi sequel from the director of The Brothers Bloom influenced a bit of the opening. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 (edited) Okay so I broke it down: The prologue is 3,103 words, or more than 10% of the film (in my head it lasts between 15-20 minutes) The first act is 8,931 words The second act is 9,687 words The third act is 6,696 words and the epilogue is 1,811 words (though I had to rush it) Edited April 25, 2018 by cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 (edited) 6 minutes ago, Isle of Pasta said: I think a certain Sci-Fi sequel from the director of The Brothers Bloom influenced a bit of the opening. At least it's used in a very different context unlike Voltron 2's ending Though most of what I had in my head writing the part before that was this Edited April 25, 2018 by cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 (edited) Oh and @Isle of Pasta How do you feel about Sir Davos dying within five minutes of being introduced? Edited April 25, 2018 by cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 1 minute ago, cookie said: Oh and @Isle of Pasta Hide contents How do you feel about Sir Davos dying within five minutes of being introduced? Spoiler I don't watch Game of Thrones, so I'm not well equipped to answer that. FWIW, I'm at the part in the bar where Kira's flirting with the blob thing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
