4815162342 Posted March 22, 2018 Share Posted March 22, 2018 Guys I have to apologize. The past few weeks have been a massacre of work overload and family problems and the next 2-3 weeks are gonna be more work massacre. So I'm gonna have to bow out of Year 3. I'll be around to read films and review, but I have to essentially shut down the writing for the near future. 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted March 22, 2018 Share Posted March 22, 2018 (edited) 3 minutes ago, 4815162342 said: Guys I have to apologize. The past few weeks have been a massacre of work overload and family problems and the next 2-3 weeks are gonna be more work massacre. So I'm gonna have to bow out of Year 3. I'll be around to read films and review, but I have to essentially shut down the writing for the near future. If you're going to cancel PoE I'll move Metroid to its date. @Xillix Edited March 22, 2018 by cookie 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 I’m probably going to temporarily remove Notes From The Otherspace so it can be reworked a bit more. Being a fantasy premise that also works in themes related to anxiety and depression, it can open the door to a LOT of unfortunate implications, and I really don’t want to do that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 3 minutes ago, Isle of Pasta said: I’m probably going to temporarily remove Notes From The Otherspace so it can be reworked a bit more. Being a fantasy premise that also works in themes related to anxiety and depression, it can open the door to a LOT of unfortunate implications, and I really don’t want to do that. BRB gonna read NFtO before it's removed. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 9 minutes ago, cookie said: BRB gonna read NFtO before it's removed. .....if you could provide PM feedback I’d appreciate it. (It’ll be released in Y3 still, just not sure how it needs to be changed) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 1 minute ago, Isle of Pasta said: .....if you could provide PM feedback I’d appreciate it. (It’ll be released in Y3 still, just not sure how it needs to be changed) I have the tab open so you can remove it and I'll still read it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 3 minutes ago, cookie said: I have the tab open so you can remove it and I'll still read it. Thanks, @cookie. I really appreciate it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 8 minutes ago, Isle of Pasta said: Thanks, @cookie. I really appreciate it. Starting now. Expect a PM when I'm done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 2 minutes ago, cookie said: Starting now. Expect a PM when I'm done. Fair warning - it’s over 8.5k words. ill take it down tomorrow fwiw - going to bed now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 @Isle of Pasta This won't effect my review or anything but there's a misplaced sentence in the very first paragraph. Just thought I point it out since it stood out to me directly. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 I just saw it. Admittedly it’s more of a missing sentence but you get the idea. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethan Hunt Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 I already read NftOS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 3 minutes ago, Ethan Hunt said: I already read NftOS You may have to read it again. (Note: If you have read it, I will PM you the list of changes I make described in detail) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YM! Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 34 minutes ago, Isle of Pasta said: You may have to read it again. (Note: If you have read it, I will PM you the list of changes I make described in detail) Can I be PM the changes as well? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 Yup. I did change it a bit based on your feedback, @YourMother the Edgelord, but depending on Cookie’s thoughts it may either need a bit of touch up or a complete overhaul. I legitimately don’t know what he’ll think of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 7 minutes ago, Isle of Pasta said: Yup. I did change it a bit based on your feedback, @YourMother the Edgelord, but depending on Cookie’s thoughts it may either need a bit of touch up or a complete overhaul. I legitimately don’t know what he’ll think of it. I have a whole logbook up and I'm about 60% through. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 2 minutes ago, cookie said: I have a whole logbook up and I'm about 60% through. Oh boy.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethan Hunt Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 47 minutes ago, Isle of Pasta said: You may have to read it again. (Note: If you have read it, I will PM you the list of changes I make described in detail) I'm curious to see what you change with it. I generally liked it. I did think a few moments in the film felt a little misinformed (Or possibly too generalized? Idk I'll see if I can look back over it and find the specific moments I was referring to) as someone who suffers from depression and social anxiety but the films good intent always shined through. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 Just now, Ethan Hunt said: I'm curious to see what you change with it. I generally liked it. I did think a few moments in the film felt a little misinformed (Or possibly too generalized? Idk I'll see if I can look back over it and find the specific moments I was referring to) as someone who suffers from depression and social anxiety but the films good intent always shined through. What moments, specifically? I do have some form of anxiety and depression, so a lot of it was kind of coming from personal experience, so I did want to hear your thoughts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YM! Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 (edited) @Isle of Pasta Personally my problems were minor. NFTO is fantastic. I think others might like the ending act more than me, Edited March 23, 2018 by YourMother the Edgelord 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
