Alpha Posted December 2, 2013 Share Posted December 2, 2013 Just out of curiosity, If I manage to finish one of my movies earlier than expected, is anyone willing to give it a pre-read? Sure. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blankments Posted December 3, 2013 Share Posted December 3, 2013 Does anyone want me to post the ten script pages of Chuck Norris and Liam Neeson? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpha Posted December 3, 2013 Share Posted December 3, 2013 Does anyone want me to post the ten script pages of Chuck Norris and Liam Neeson? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted December 3, 2013 Share Posted December 3, 2013 Does anyone want me to post the ten script pages of Chuck Norris and Liam Neeson? 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blankments Posted December 3, 2013 Share Posted December 3, 2013 Don't say I didn't warn you (even though I didn't.) Excerpt from CHUCK NORRIS AND LIAM NEESON VS. THE LOCH NESS MONSTER By BLANK MENTS INT. PLANE - CLASS A – DAY Our hero, CHUCK NORRIS, stares out the window. He is on the phone with his dear wife. CHUCK NORRIS I am telling you, honey. I’m gonna win an Oscar with this role. GENA O’KELLEY (V.O.) Dear, I’m just not a fan of you shooting overseas. CHUCK NORRIS I know, but it’s not my decision. Besides, I can’t break my contract. Just pray for me, okay? A flight attendant walks by, but then notices Chuck Norris on the phone, clearly violating safety laws. FLIGHT ATTENDANT Sir, I’m going to have to ask you to turn off your phone. CHUCK NORRIS Oh, sorry. (to phone:) Honey, I gotta go. Love you, bye. Chuck Norris hangs up the phone. EXT. INVERNESS AIRPORT The private jet touches down. The passengers quickly unload CHUCK NORRIS Wait, who am I driving with? The assistant director looks at his clipboard. ASSISTANT DIRECTOR Well, since it’s just the five of us, and I’ve gotta go ahead on my own… Looks like you’ve got the only car. Mr. Gregg will be driving, with you, Mr. Neeson, and Ms. Hayek. CHUCK NORRIS Wait, why are we having all the big names in one car? ASSISTANT DIRECTOR The rest of the crew was on a different plane. I’ll go ahead and meet you there. CHUCK NORRIS Sounds fine to me. INT. CAR – DAY Director CLARK GREGG is driving. SALMA HAYEK is the front seat while Norris and LIAM NEESON are stuck in the back. Gregg looks in the mirror to speak with Norris CLARK GREGG It really is an honor to have you on board, Chuck. I know it’s only my second film, but you still thought it was a great script. CHUCK NORRIS Hey, it’s no problem. I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. LIAM NEESON It really is a great script. Neeson sounds like he’s being honest, but glares at Norris out of the corner of his eye. A rivalry is born. LIAM NEESON (CONT’D) I’m glad you could get me in the big supporting role. After all, that category at the Oscars this year is gonna much easier to win in than, say, lead actor. This is clearly directed at Norris. Gregg doesn’t notice. CLARK GREGG You flatter me too much. Nah, I’d be lucky to have this get a positive reception. CHUCK NORRIS No way, Clark! The only way this picture could be better is if, say, Sean Connery had the big supporting role. Salma Hayek eyes the two boys. She’s picking up what they’re putting down. CHUCK NORRIS (CONT’D) No offense to you, Liam, at all. LIAM NEESON None. Taken. SALMA HAYEK Well, Clark, I’m happy you’ve got us as a great cast. CLARK GREGG Well, thank you, Salma. To be honest, I think your role is the best. If anyone’s gonna be nominated, it’ll be you. Norris and Neeson share a look. Their previous rivalry is now a team up. LIAM NEESON But, Clark, isn’t the heart of the story in the friendship between Paul and Simon? CHUCK NORRIS Yeah, I mean, Salma dies in the third act. CLARK GREGG That may be true, but her death scene is the most emotional I’ve ever written. Well, here we are. The car stops, but Clark Gregg sees something CLARK GREGG What the f- EXT. LOCH NESS TOWN ENTRY – TWILIGHT Utter dystopia. The entire town is crawling with zombies made of the crew. INT. CAR - TWILIGHT CHUCK NORRIS Uh, is this normal? CLARK GREGG This wasn’t in the location scout! Gregg puts his foot on the pedal, quickly. EXT. LOCH NESS TOWN ENTRY – TWILIGHT The car quickly run over three zombies blocking the car, and the car speeds down the highway around the Loch. INT. CAR – TWILIGHT CLARK GREGG God, I hope their union doesn’t sue. SALMA HAYEK What’s going on? CLARK GREGG I don’t know. Neeson grabs between the cushions, pulling out three handguns. He tosses one to Norris and one to Hayek. CHUCK NORRIS You’re kidding, right? Neeson stares at Norris gravely as Gregg continues aggressively driving. LIAM NEESON You saw the crew, right? CHUCK NORRIS Yeah, and? LIAM NEESON They’re a threat to us now. We can’t go unarmed. The stress is too much for Hayek. She faints. CLARK GREGG Oh gosh. That’s a lawsuit waiting to happen. LIAM NEESON Look, Norris. I don’t like you. I think you’re a washed up hack who just signed onto this role to be relevant again. CHUCK NORRIS So what does that make you? CLARK GREGG Uhh, guys... there are more important things to worry about now than your own insecurity issues. LIAM NEESON Shut the fuck up, Gregg! CHUCK NORRIS Hey! Norris has pulled his gun out to Neeson. He cocks the gun. CHUCK NORRIS I don’t care what you say about me, or anyone else, Neeson. What I do care about is the dangers of sin. LIAM NEESON Oh, god – CHUCK NORRIS Thou shalt never take the Lord’s name in vain. CLARK GREGG Uh, guys... No one is listening to Gregg, but Neeson has drawn his gun too. LIAM NEESON Fuck Jesus, man! I was the biggest badass around, but then you... you had to get Chuck Norris jokes. You stole my thunder. CHUCK NORRIS You still got roles at least. I’ve gotten nothing... until now. You think I’m gonna let you ruin it for me? There’s a snowball’s chance in Sam Hill of that happening. LIAM NEESON What the fuck does Sam Hill even mean? CHUCK NORRIS It means – CLARK GREGG Oh, he11 with it! EXT. LOCH NESS ROAD - NIGHT The car pulls to the side of the road. Norris, Neeson, and Gregg exit the car to get some fresh hair. CLARK GREGG (CONT’D) Look here, guys. This is a movie we’re making. Ever done one before? We’ve gotta cooperate, okay? We have a real crisis here, and I can’t have you too going off on me like that. Is that understood? Gunshots are heard, but they aren’t from Norris or Neeson’s guns. Gregg turns around to see – SAMUEL L. JACKSON D@mn right it was understood, motherfucker. Jackson is wearing a trench coat of sheer awesomeness. His eyes are covered in green scales. LIAM NEESON What are you doing here, Sam? SAMUEL L. JACKSON Who you talking too? CHUCK NORRIS Uhhh... I’m pretty sure Liam’s talking to you. Seeing your name is Sam. CLARK GREGG Yeah, I called Sam all the time in our scenes together in – SAMUEL L. JACKSON Are you talking to me, motherfucker? LIAM NEESON Uh, yeah. CHUCK NORRIS Watch your language. SAMUEL L. JACKSON I am Samuel L. Motherfucking Jackson. You bitches would be best to remember that in the last moments before you die. CLARK GREGG Huh? Jackson pulls out a harpoon gun out of his trench coat. As he opens it up, it seems to be a portal to another world. SAMUEL L. JACKSON Say good night, Clarky! Jackson shoots the harpoon gun in Gregg’s legs. He immediately falls to the ground unconscious. Jackson turns to Neeson and Norris who are staring at him in shock. SAMUEL L. JACKSON Don’t you guys worry. The boss has other plans for you two dickheads. CHUCK NORRIS What. LIAM NEESON The. CHUCK NORRIS LIAM NEESON Fuck. Norris and Neeson stare at each other. A plan is made silently. Norris runs to tackle Jackson. Jackson quickly wraps himself and Gregg in the coat. They disappear. Norris and Neeson look around for him but then... SAMUEL L. JACKSON Wow, you guys are shitheads. He is on top of the van, and the unconscious Salma Hayek is his hands now. SAMUEL L. JACKSON (CONT’D) There’s nothing like two hostages. Jackson disappears along with the two hostages in his coat. Neeson and Norris are in shock, but for different reasons. CHUCK NORRIS Where did they go? LIAM NEESON You swore earlier. CHUCK NORRIS Where the fuck did they go?? LIAM NEESON You swore again. CHUCK NORRIS I swear when I’m panicked, doesn’t mean it’s not a sin. LIAM NEESON Sure... SAMUEL L. JACKSON (V.O.) Looking for me? Norris and Neeson turn to the loch. EXT. LOCH NESS - NIGHT The loch has huge waves coming from the center. Suddenly, the LOCH NESS MONSTER appears. Samuel L. Jackson climbs out through his teeth. SAMUEL L. JACKSON Woo, wee! You guys should see the look on your faces. EXT. LOCH NESS ROAD - NIGHT We see the look on their faces. Complete. Utter shock. EXT. LOCH NESS - NIGHT SAMUEL L. JACKSON Meet my good friend here, Nessie. LOCH NESS MONSTER You may call me the Loch Ness Monster, and nothing else, Sam. The Loch Ness Monster’s voice is pure golden honey. Think Morgan Freeman, but more monster-y. SAMUEL L. JACKSON Yes, master. LOCH NESS MONSTER. Excellent. Now be a good boy, Sammy and stay with the hostages in my nose. SAMUEL L. JACKSON Yes, master. Jackson crawls into the Loch Ness Monster’s nose, as the Loch Ness Monster continues to speak. LOCH NESS MONSTER Chuck Norris and Liam Neeson, is it? EXT. LOCH NESS ROAD - NIGHT LIAM NESSON That’s us. CHUCK NORRIS What the he11 do you want? EXT. LOCH NESS - NIGHT The monster smiles. LOCH NESS MONSTER A good show. Here’s my deal for you. As you may have probably guessed, I have brainwashed Mr. Samuel L. Jackson to do my dirty work. Now, I have heard tales of both your badass accomplishments, and I’d like to offer you a deal. I’ll release your hostages... if you can beat my zombie army and its commander-in-chief, Sam. Of course, you must kill him, but what’s a good feat without some death? EXT. LOCH NESS ROAD - NIGHT CHUCK NORRIS I don’t negotiate with terrorists. EXT. LOCH NESS - NIGHT The monster smiles again. LOCH NESS MONSTER Well then, I’d guess it’s a good thing I’m a cryptid. Within 24 hours I will eat my hostages. It is your choice if you’d like for them to go free. Goodnight, Mr. Norris, Mr. Neeson. Submersion begins, and a huge wave is formed from the Monster sinking back into Loch Ness. EXT. LOCH NESS ROAD - NIGHT From the perspectives of Norris and Neeson, it looks like a giant wave is coming to kill them. LIAM NEESON What now? We can’t fight a flood. CHUCK NORRIS No, we can’t. He does a roundhouse kick to a tree and pulls off a surfboard-piece of bark. CHUCK NORRIS But we can ride one. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted December 3, 2013 Share Posted December 3, 2013 THAT WAS AWESOME. Seriously, great job, Blank! I wonder if your teacher and classmates liked it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpha Posted December 3, 2013 Share Posted December 3, 2013 That. Was. Hilarious and amazing. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blankments Posted December 3, 2013 Share Posted December 3, 2013 Thanks guys! It really just something I quickly wrote to get it out of the way, but I'm glad you all liked it. I'm considering maybe writing the full script, but that'd just be for fun since obviously it'd be impossible to make into an indie production THAT WAS AWESOME. Seriously, great job, Blank! I wonder if your teacher and classmates liked it. I can answer that. Classmates didn't see it, but the film theory teacher was his typical missing-the-point self. "I think it'd be a lot less cheesy if it was someone besides Chuck Norris" and "The characters are a bit more crazy than realistic." He did write down "lol" next to SLJ showing up though, and I got a 50/50 A+ on it 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpha Posted December 4, 2013 Share Posted December 4, 2013 Thanks guys! It really just something I quickly wrote to get it out of the way, but I'm glad you all liked it. I'm considering maybe writing the full script, but that'd just be for fun since obviously it'd be impossible to make into an indie production I can answer that. Classmates didn't see it, but the film theory teacher was his typical missing-the-point self. "I think it'd be a lot less cheesy if it was someone besides Chuck Norris" and "The characters are a bit more crazy than realistic." He did write down "lol" next to SLJ showing up though, and I got a 50/50 A+ on it 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Films Posted December 5, 2013 Share Posted December 5, 2013 early april/may schedule [some films might get pushed back] 13 april horror house [complete] the innocent [limited, got idea] 20 april Untitled animation from same company as hush hush little baby [it's got idea and my comic strip, date unconfirmed] innocent [limited] 27 april innocent [wide] Romanian [imax only, not started] 4 may Move [based on little mix, not started] Romanian [imax only] 11 may Romanian [wide] 25 may candy crush [complete] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blankments Posted December 6, 2013 Share Posted December 6, 2013 I don't know what Innocent is, but films, you should know that one of my major Oscar contenders (and the only winner) from last year was titled Innocense, which is obviously very similar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpha Posted December 6, 2013 Share Posted December 6, 2013 Yeah, what is Innocent about? Technically it wouldn't do so well in my review because if it was similar, I'd call it a ripoff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChD Posted December 6, 2013 Share Posted December 6, 2013 What is Romanian about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Films Posted December 6, 2013 Share Posted December 6, 2013 Don't know what Innocence is about but The Innocent is a musical about someone who is sent down to life in prison for stealing even though the case is being over exaggerated by a police officer. This police officer than kills his wife and a cat and mouse chase begins. A musical which is like a mix of Les Miserables/Prisoners and this is starring Hugh Jackman and Hailee Steinfeld in a pretty much two hander film. Romanian is a battle epic but this is the most likely to film to get delayed and it might. Schedule update [production- the script is in the middle of being written, starter- nothing has been done, post production- in script editing process, complete- means completed fully, pre-production- something has been made eg. a comic strip but script has not started] Horror house- Post production Candy Crush- Post Production Move- Production Untitled tortoise animation- Pre-production The Innocent- Starter Romanian- Starter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted December 6, 2013 Share Posted December 6, 2013 The Academy will be released in its original form in May, but I want to tweak Hand Drawn Heroes a bit, especially the final act. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Films Posted December 6, 2013 Share Posted December 6, 2013 will someone be willing to read Move when it is completed in the next couple of days. I want to see if it is ok and get advice from an expert. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpha Posted December 6, 2013 Share Posted December 6, 2013 will someone be willing to read Move when it is completed in the next couple of days. I want to see if it is ok and get advice from an expert. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blankments Posted December 7, 2013 Share Posted December 7, 2013 Don't know what Innocence is about but The Innocent is a musical about someone who is sent down to life in prison for stealing even though the case is being over exaggerated by a police officer. This police officer than kills his wife and a cat and mouse chase begins. A musical which is like a mix of Les Miserables/Prisoners and this is starring Hugh Jackman and Hailee Steinfeld in a pretty much two hander film. Yeah, that's totally different than Innocense *thumbs-up* Innocense was about sexual abuse and the messed-up gender status in Middle Eastern countries Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted December 10, 2013 Share Posted December 10, 2013 For Year 8, I want to fit in another drama, maybe even a western, as a more serious OC. Then in Y9, I'd like to work with Wes Anderson again in a crime comedy set in 1940s Broadway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChD Posted December 15, 2013 Share Posted December 15, 2013 Part 3...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...