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1st Annual Forum Games! - PART 21 - 116 - FINAL PART ON 117 - WE HAVE A "WINNER" - AFTER CREDIT SCENE - Page 119

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Oh, please. As if Blank would ever threaten me. Or anyone for that matter. Even with a crazy haircut, he's too nice a guy. I hope I stab him in the back in the next part.

 

Also, the ED and Pink stuff needs to end in a romantic self-sacrifice thing (only with none of them surviving). It's the only thing that would make sense. 

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Oh, please. As if Blank would ever threaten me. Or anyone for that matter. Even with a crazy haircut, he's too nice a guy. I hope I stab him in the back in the next part.

 

You think this haircut, red?

 

/Branagh

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To show how I write this and how complicated it is and how it evolves, here are the "bloopers" or what what I changed.

 

- I didn't change who died. Who I pulled is who I pulled.

- Numbers originally didn't see Kal, just Ed.

- Kal originally died from 2 lasers to the chest and 1 laser to the head from the Olaf plush, but that felt stupid, and I wanted to give Darkelf some redemption.

- Saying that, Darkelf was originally supposed to die from getting his spine ripped out from A2K's wand, but that didn't sit right with me. This is the Forum Games, not Mortal Kombat

- Spazz91's clone was originally supposed to die by being squished by a beam when he rolled into the path, but that felt stupid, so I changed it to the car "fight" with Mango

- The money didn't catch fire, and there was no cocaine avalanche in front of Heretic. I realized I didn't write an exit for him so I wrote that up. 

- Water Bottle wasn't supposed to reappear and help Stingray get out, but I needed an exit for him and wanted to keep some team members together

- AndyLL originally killed A2K by snatching the wand from him and shoving it up the back of his neck, but that felt dumb

- The scene with Tarzan, Dar, and Mango wasn't there but I 1. needed a scene to explain the Bollywood dance and 2. I wanted to show at least one team together, before Jandrew's antics

- ShawnMR had multiple X-Men powers, but it felt very uneventful and like a cop out, so I left him with just Magneto's.

- I was going to include all 42, but it was going to be too long and I couldn't figure out where take everyones storylines

- I couldn't figure out a good place to put the promised cheesecake so that'll be saved for later

- Jajang was originally electrocuted by IJack. I actually didn't get the kill from GOT, but from a script I wrote called Robotcracy.

- Noctis finding the grenades was written in late

- Bballman's death was in Part 9 and Icerolls and Numbers' dialouge was in Part 8

- Blankments, Reddevil, and Punishment's landings was put in later

- I took out that exploding C4 beside Water Bottle and Stingray because it felt dumb, but I needed a way for them to interact so I put it back

- Ed wasn't supposed to appear until Part 9, but since he always does "...", i wanted him to know his moment was coming

- The Jason Derulo reference was very last minute

- More portals were supposed to open, but I wanted to ease some confusion so I took it out

- Jandrew was supposed to accidentally hit a keyboard and create portals, then go back and hit it purposefully and create portals, but I felt it took away from the purposeful part ("lets reboot!"), so I took it out

- Different people had solos in the song, but I wanted to give some lines to people who havent spoke as much. I wanted to take Tele out, but I thought it be funny for people to imagine him krumping

 

Yep, so yahh that's why these all take so long. I write these things like writing a real script. Would've been funny to see how 8 and 9 ended up if those bloopers remained

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Here we go, updated Kill List


KILL LIST

Moderators- 4 (Captain Craig- Collateral Consequences of Rocket Attack; Chasmmi- Guard-Dog Mauling, AC Slater- Bane, Water- Dragon Chew Toy)
Tawasal- 3 (Adam- Withheld Emergency Medical Treatment, MovieMan89- Poisoning, John Marston- Throat Cut)
Sam- 2 (Scott Pilgrim + Spore- Decoy Deception)
Walt Disney- 2 (Ruthie- via Grand Theft Snowmobile, Mattrek- Snowmobile X-Games)
A2K*- 1 (Darkelf- Unlicensed Magic Chiropracty)
AC Slater*- 1 (Grim22- C4 Boobytrap)
AndyLL- 1 (A2K- Stabbing)
Cmasterclay*- 1 (Cmasterclay- Suicide)
Darkelf*- 1 (Kal- Stabbing)
#ED- 1 (Mulder- Gunshot)
Empire- 1 (Spazz91- Stabbing)
Films- 1 (CJohn- Stabbing)
iJack- 1 (Jajang- Khal Drago’d)
Kal*- 1 (Bballman24- Spider Bomb)
Jack Nevada*- 1 (CoolEric258- Magical Disembowelment)
Mango- 1 (Sun's Son- Grenade Toss)
Noctis- 1 (Lilmac- Grenade Toss)
Numbers- 1 (Bishop54- Improvised Grenade Baseball)
Panda*- 1 (MGS- Crossbow)
Sixteen16- 1 (Firedeep- Stabbing)
Spaghetti- 1 (ChD- Unintentional Clone Suicide Bomber)
Spidey Freak- 1 (BoxOfficeZ- Face Boiling)
Stingray- 1 (Panda- Hammer Time)
Tarzan- 1 (Jack Nevada- Slashing)

* = Now deceased




And updated episode appearances


EPISODE APPEARANCES

Capitol
Jandrew- 7 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 8, 9)

ShawnMR- 4 (Episodes 2, 4, 6, 8)

Jajang*- 1 (Episode 8)


Players

ChD- 9* (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9)
Dragon- 9 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9)
#ED- 9 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9)

Alfredstellar- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 6, 7, 8, 9)
AndyLL- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 6, 7, 8, 9)
Bballman24*- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8)
DamienRoc- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 8, 9)
Ecstasy- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9)
Empire- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9)
Jesus of Suburbia- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 6, 7, 8, 9)
Lilmac*- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 6, 7, 8)
Mango- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 7, 8, 9)
Mr. Pink- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 6, 7, 9)
Reddevil- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 9)
Sam- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9)
Spazz91*- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9)
Stingray- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 6, 7, 8, 9)
Water Bottle- 8 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 6, 7, 8, 9)

A2K*- 7 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 8, 9)
Blankments- 7 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8)
Darkelf- 7* (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 8, 9)
Fancyarcher- 7 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7)
Films- 7 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 6, 7, 8, 9)
Heretic- 7 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 8, 9)
Jay Hollywood- 7 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8)
Kal- 7* (Episodes 1, 2, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9)
Noctis- 7 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 8, 9)
Punishment- 7 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 7, 9)
Telemachos- 7 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 6, 7, 8)

BoxOfficeZ*- 6 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 7)
DAR- 6 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 5, 7, 8)
Jack Nevada*- 6 (Episodes 1, 2, 5, 6, 7, 8)
Mattrek*- 6 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4, 6, 7)
Numbers- 6 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 6, 8, 9)
Spaghetti- 6 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 8)
Tarzan- 6 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 5, 7, 8)
Tawasal- 6 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 8)
Walt Disney- 6 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 6, 7, 8)
WileECoyote- 6 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 7)

Blink23- 5 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 6, 8)
CoolEric258*- 5 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6)
Firedeep*- 5 (Episodes 1, 2, 5, 6, 7)
Iceroll- 5 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 8, 9)
K1stpierre- 5 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 6, 8)
Sixteen16- 5 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 6, 7)

AC Slater*- 4 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 5)
CJohn- 4* (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4)
Claire Holt- 4 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 6)
Cmasterclay*- 4 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4)
Grim22*- 4 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4)
John Marston*- 4 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5)
Lady Daenerys- 4 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 6)
Michael Gary Scott*- 4 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 4)
MovieMan89*- 4 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 5)
Spidey Freak- 4 (Episodes 1, 2, 3, 7)
Water*- 4 (Episodes 1, 2, 4, 6)

Adam- 3* (Episodes 1, 2, 4)
Chasmmi*- 3 (Episodes 1, 2, 4)
Mulder*- 3 (Episodes 1, 2, 3)
Panda- 3* (Episodes 1, 2, 4)
Ruthie*- 3 (Episodes 1, 2, 3)
Sun's Son*- 3 (Episodes 1, 2, 3)

Bishop54*- 1 (Episode 1)
Captain Craig*- 1 (Episode 1)
Scott Pilgrim*- 1 (Episode 1)
Spore*- 1 (Episode 1)


Wild Cards
iJack- 3 (Episodes 5, 8, 9)

 

ChD, Dragon, and #ED are now the only members to appear in all 9 episodes.

 

3 surviving players have appeared in less than half of the the 9 episodes (4/9). 2 are from Team Ice and Fire.

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4815162342 Global Phenomenon

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So the following players are in Westeros as the Mod Army approaches:

 

Numbers

Iceroll

DAR

Walt Disney

Jay Hollywood

Damien Roc

Jesus of Suburbia

Ecstasy

Tawasal

Telemachos

 

So, Ice and I are stuck with the 2 Team Killers and a guy possessed by the Black Suit. And I thought things would be difficult :unsure: 

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Walt Disney Summer Tentpole

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So the following players are in Westeros as the Mod Army approaches:

 

Numbers

Iceroll

DAR

Walt Disney

Jay Hollywood

Damien Roc

Jesus of Suburbia

Ecstasy

Tawasal

Telemachos

 

So, Ice and I are stuck with the 2 Team Killers and a guy possessed by the Black Suit. And I thought things would be difficult :unsure: 

 

 

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