Ezen Baklattan Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 Just now, cookie said: Biology degree does not make you a doctor, Taron He's trying his best, okay?! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 27, 2018 Author Share Posted April 27, 2018 I think Taron would have an easier time just assassinating the three he has left on his target list instead of building a pocket size nuke but whatever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 2 minutes ago, cookie said: I think Taron would have an easier time just assassinating the three he has left on his target list instead of building a pocket size nuke but whatever. The devastation of him losing nearly all of his allies was a big tipping point for him abandoning his precision and deciding to act on his rage in a violent way. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 Not sure if you’ve seen the movie Heathers, but Venchell was also quite inspired the character JD in that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 27, 2018 Author Share Posted April 27, 2018 Yup, definitely see Black Panther in this ending. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 Just now, cookie said: Yup, definitely see Black Panther in this ending. I guess I don’t get to make fun of you anymore for copying Marvel movies. I see your reasoning. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 27, 2018 Author Share Posted April 27, 2018 (edited) That letter does not last only 47 seconds. It took me more than a minute just to speed-read through it. Edited April 27, 2018 by cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 Just now, cookie said: That letter does not only 47 seconds. It took me more than a minute just to speed-read through it. I meant that it’s just the instrumental for the first 47 seconds of the songs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 27, 2018 Author Share Posted April 27, 2018 Just now, Isle of Pasta said: I meant that it’s just the instrumental for the first 47 seconds of the songs. But the end credits come up at 0:47 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 But if you’re at the letter than it’s over. Please be a benevolent dessert. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 Just now, cookie said: But the end credits come up at 0:47 Maybe I should have had the song start during the letter.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rorschach Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 @cookie Bro, you are so cruel! 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 I didn’t get a “What. Fucking What.” post. That’s a good sign, right? ......right? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 27, 2018 Author Share Posted April 27, 2018 (edited) Spark: Homeward (Release version) The good news: This is a marked improvement over the initial draft. The bad news: This is not as good as Rising. You did my boi Taron... decently. His motivation is actually pretty good, but I don't feel like his character is 100% consistent all the time and some of his scheming lost me for a bit, unfortunately. Although even if his story arc and ending lifts directly from Killmonger it's done well for what it is. Alex herself does remain the standout, although I feel like Kozar and Aera got kinda shafted towards the second half of the film (given how much time is spent in the first half with Kozar's backstory, that becomes a bit troubling). Ezor and Katherine do well for what they have and Everett still turning out to be robot makes more sense here than it ever did when Gyllenhaal did it. Is it wrong of me to say that I found the first half of this a little duller than the initial draft? I don't know, it just felt like it took too long to really go anywhere. The second half improves the pacing tremendously so it's fine by the end. And I guess Spark 3 is going to be the return of Michelle Pfeiffer so I got that to look forward to.B Edited April 27, 2018 by cookie 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 I’ll take it! I do find it funny that the first act was a bit more dull - I don’t recall changing much except making the opening an action sequence. Also @Rorschach its final score on the CC is 77. I think everyone reviewed it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 27, 2018 Author Share Posted April 27, 2018 1 minute ago, Isle of Pasta said: Also @Rorschach its final score on the CC is 77. I think everyone reviewed it. So in my final gambit, I had it fall under both Voltrons 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezen Baklattan Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 Just now, cookie said: So in my final gambit, I had it fall under both Voltrons By two points! Now I just gotta make sure you do Anna K good. I know you quite liked the first draft, and I hardly changed it aside from addressing the points you had. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rorschach Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 2 minutes ago, Isle of Pasta said: I’ll take it! I do find it funny that the first act was a bit more dull - I don’t recall changing much except making the opening an action sequence. Also @Rorschach its final score on the CC is 77. I think everyone reviewed it. Yeah, I've been neglecting to update the chart for two days. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xillix Posted April 27, 2018 Share Posted April 27, 2018 According to my spreadsheet it's 78 >.> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie Posted April 27, 2018 Author Share Posted April 27, 2018 Coming Friday night: Being Anna Kendrick Guillermo Del Toro presents Crimson Peak Babies Dante's Peak 2: Electric Boogaloo 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
